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贰 、罗马尼亚(Romania)语语言类错误

㈠时态错误、语态不当

例一*:Forbes released the 2013 Global 2000 list, and CNOOC
Limited **
ranked ***111.

应当是无所作为语态was ranked。例如:the only Canadian woman to be ranked in
the top 50 of the women’s world
rankings.[3](…进入世界妇女子排球行榜前50名的绝无仅有的加拿大农妇。)

Agassi was at that time ranked sixth in the world.[4]

例二:中中原人民共和国海洋石油有限公司在东方之珠发布,收购西班牙(Spain)瑞普索(Repsol—YPE)公司在印度尼西亚基金的中国共产党第五次全国代表大会油田的片段权益。在该项收购合同中,有限公司投资5.8亿美金,并将会带来每年四千万桶(636万立方米)的份额柴油,此项兼并是时下中中原人民共和国公司最大的并购国外资金类别之一。

CNOOC Limited announced that it had purchased Indonesian oil assets from
Spanish oil giant Repsol-YPE. CNOOC said it has agreed to pay
US$580 million for part of the working interests in five oil and gas
fields of Repsol-YPE.

不知何故要翻成间接引语。既然是直接引语,提示代词、时间状语、地方状语和动词都要做相应变更。例如:He
said,“I haven’t heard from my parents these days.”

——>He said that he hadn’t heard from his parents those days.[5]

所以,下边应该改成过去到位时,可能去掉CNOOC said。

例三:能源公司,中中原人民共和国海洋原油总公司与德士古中国集团立下了亚速海湾渤中25-贰分一5-1北大发商谈,完结了对跨过自己经营区块和合营区块油田构造实行全部开发。

China National Offshore Oil Corporation (“CNOOC。”) and Texaco China
B.V., a subsidiary of Chevron Texaco (“ChevronTexaco”), had entered into
an agreement for the unitization development ofBZ25-1/25-1Soil field in
the Bohai Bay, which realized the integrated development across
the oil field structure of self-financed area and corporation area.

中文不够严厉,刚签了支付商量,就“完结了”开发。英文那样写或者就十分。先看agreement的定义:An agreement is
a formal decision about future action that is made by two or more
countries, groups, or people.[6]请小心是about future
action。其次,看看英文媒体的例句:

The agreement states that Saleh will transfer power and leave office
within 30 days.[7]

The agreement will allow the Lockerbie families to begin receiving
millions of dollars each from Libya.[8]因此,realized应改成would
realize。

例四:中华夏族民共和国海洋原油有限集团发表黄海玄武湖天然气联合开发品种标准开发银行。同盟双方是中中原人民共和国海洋原油有限公司和中石油化工创立的西湖项目中方管理委员会会和哈得孙湾千岛湖重油汽油作业公司,对该区域的总体开发进行管制。中夏族民共和国海洋有限公司任该类型的作业者。

CNOOC Limited (the”Company”) announced that the joint development
project of Xihu Natural Gas in the East China Sea had been inaugurated.
Current partners,CNOOC Limited and Sinopec, have formed a joint
management committee and established the East China Sea Xihu Oil and Gas
Operating Company to oversee the overall development of the region.
CNOOC Limited was the operator.

此地最终一句用了二个LINKING OKuga STATE OF BEING
VERB的过去式,由于这一个动词用于描述状态,除非被描述的情况已经济体改成,不然,要慎用过去式。网上有本电子书叫《专门为华夏人写的罗马尼亚语语法》,有一段专门讲述了那种场合:

要是大家看过三个小男孩然后大家说

He was a good boy.

这就是说他现在已不是多个好男孩了,变成了多个不乖的儿女,大概他早已死了。

英文里的过去式平日是暗访用来破案的端倪。有三次,有二个慈母,向处警报案,说她的姑娘失踪了,她在记者前边,声泪俱下地说

She was such a nice girl.

警察立时觉得那位阿娘有失水准,因为她不应当用过去式的,用了过去式,表示孙女一度死了,不过阿娘不是说他失踪了吗?为何她用过去式,极有大概因为他精晓他孙女早已死了,才搜索枯肠,用了过去式。警察之所以狐疑老妈笔者正是刺客,事实也果真如此:那位阿娘打自身的丫头,动手太重,将闺女打死了,谎报女儿失踪,她用了过去式,使警察知道他有毛病。整个案子的侦破,就在于过去式。

唯有写那么些稿蛇时CNOOC已经不是作业者,不然,就不应该用过去式。

㈡凭想象用介词

例一:China Offshore Oil Nanhuanghai Corporation was
renamed as China Offshore Oil Donghai Corporation.

其一as是剩下的。例:Tel Aviv’s Kings Square was renamed Yitzhak Rabin
Square[9].(布宜诺斯艾利斯的君主广场更名为伊扎克·拉宾广场。)

Myddleton Way was renamed Allende Avenue[10].

Theshipwassold,paintedand renamed the
‘SuezStar'[11].(那艘轮船被售卖后油漆一新,并更名为“苏伊士之星”号。)

例二:Standard & Poor’s and Moody’s continue to rate the company
with credit ratings of AA- and Aa3,the highest for a Chinese
corporation.

with是多余的。例:He is generally rated the country’s No. 3
industrialist[12].(他被世家常见视作该国的第二大实业家。)在网上还找到了一条标准普尔的评级消息:

S&P still happy to rate Australia AAA[13]

例三:中华夏族民共和国海洋天然气有限公司荣膺第玖五届普氏全世界能源”年度最棒并购交易”大奖。

CNOOC Limited received the Platts Strategic Vision
Award of Deal of the Year.

Strategic vision Award是大奖项的名字,里面分成了Energy Company of the
Year,首席营业官 of the Year,Deal of the
Year等若干个单项奖,类似诺Bell奖分成物理奖、化学奖等,表达方法为Nobel
Prize in Physiological or Medicine。由此那里也理应写成Strategic Vision
Award in Deal of the Year。

例四:五月在布宜诺斯艾Liss成立黄广东边石脑油公司,在芜湖石油部卡奔塔利亚湾石脑油勘探指挥部的基础上建立西里伯斯海西部汽油公司。

In June 1982 the Nanhai East Oil Corporation was founded in Guangzhou
and the Nanhai West Oil Corporation was founded in Zhanjiang with its
base at 
the Nanhai Oil Exploration Headquarters of the Ministry of
Petroleum Industry.

with its base at那是自个儿想象的,应该是on the basis of。

例五:successfully entered the international capital market through
the public listing of its oil and gas assets in New York and Hong
Kong stock markets.

先是,就算用New York Stock Exchange而不是stock
market的话,介词肯定用on,不是in。例如:…a basket of blue chip stocks
listed on the American
Exchange[14].(…在美利坚合众国证券交易所上市的一组绩优股。)

Companies may want to get their stock listed on a stock exchange[15].

标题是那里用的是market,到底是in the market依旧on the market?有个English
Language Learners StackExchange网站是那样解释的:

You can also be in the market if you are willing to buy something.
Compare:

Company X is on the market for a takeover.

Company X is in the market for a takeover.

The first sentence means someone can buy them- the second
indicates they want to buy!

If something is for sale, it is on the market.

Our product has been on the market for two months now.

There is a lot of software on the market.

I want to move to another town; I put my house on the market[16].

由地方的演讲看来,上市公司是贩卖股票,应该用on the stock market.

例六:2013年起,中华人民共和国海油第⑥届班子建议“二遍超越”的宏伟蓝图,“三回超过”在辅导思想上平昔注意卓越科学发展大旨,紧扣转变发展措施主线,牢牢把握“做强做优”方向,以建设国际一流资源集团为目的,强化风险意识、义务意识和更新意识,正确处理品质与进程、规模与功效、当前与长时间、全部与部分、机关与基层等关键关系,更好肩负大旨集团的三大义务,树立起负总责的国家原油集团形象,达成新时代集团新的超越发展。

Since 2011,CNOOC has set for new leap frog development under the
guidance of the sixth leader group. The Company steadily holds to the
scientific concept of development and accelerates the improving in the
economic development mode, while fully undertaking the responsibilities
of a corporate citizen.

set作及物动词时才有开设、建立的意味,V-T If you set a date, price,
goal, or level, you decide what it will be[17].(决定;确定)。例如:

The conference chairman has set a deadline of noon
tomorrow.(会议主持人设定前些天上午为尾声时间限制。)[18]

A date will be set for a future
meeting.(将为前途的集会规定多少个日子。)[18]

为此set for是个错误的选配,除非be set
for。汉语“建议。。。宏伟蓝图”已属于动宾搭配不当。英文set
for…development也狼狈,应该去掉for,development后边加goal。

例七:The representatives participating in the meeting
discussed on the Provisional Regulations for the work of CNOOC
Delegating a Board of Supervisors, and proposed modification
suggestions.

discuss是及物动词,其定义是V-T If people discuss something,they talk
about it, often in order to reach a decision.(讨论)[18]。例如:

I will be discussing the situation with colleagues
tomorrow.[18](作者将于明日和共事们谈论这么些场馆。)

The council discussed the proposed law on
taxes.[18](委员会研究了所提的税法议案。)

例八:中国海洋重油总公司和中华夏族民共和国化学工业建设总公司进行理并了结合,中国化学工业进出口总公司建全部并入中华人民共和国海油。

China National Chemical Construction Company (CNCCC) merged into and
became a subsidiary of CNOOC.

into前边要有宾语。例如:

Three bureaus have merged into two.[19](多少个局统百分之十多少个局。)

If agreed, the six regional Careers Wales companies would merge into a
single national Careers Wales.[20]

例九:吸引主要,实现年度产量目的。集团已规定二〇一六年净产量指标为422-435百万桶油当量。

First, the company will focus on major tasks so as to accomplish its
annual production target. The company has set its net production
target at 422-435 million BOE in 2014.

Target后边应该是of而不是at,特意在网上找来两条关于产量目的的音信。

As per assessment,the total cotton production would stand at 13.5395
million bales against the target of 15.1 million bales set by the
government.[21]

Aug 4(Reuters) -Australia’s Roc Oil Co Ltd (ROC.AX: Cotation) ROC.L on
Tuesday said it was unlikely to achieve its 2009 production target of
11,000 barrels of oil equivalent per day (boepd), hurt by closure of a
well and a planned downtime.[22]

例十:The LNG receiving stations supplied gas for Guangdong,
Fujian and Shanghai safely and stably.

地名前边的介词用to。例如:

to supply gas to communities[23](向社区供气)

West-East Gas Pipeline Project to supply gas to Shanghai in 2005[24]

RIL-BP to supply gas to Andhra power projects[25]

例十一:店铺加快小车和船只加气市集布局。

The company sped up the entrance in the vehicle and ship gas
filling market.

应该是into。N-SING If you make an entrance into a particular activity or
system, you succeed in becoming involved in it.[26](进入)。例:

The acquisition helped BCCI make its initial entrance into the U.S.
market.[26](这一次接管支持国际信贷银行第③遍跻身了美国集镇。)


[4]Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English.Pearson Education
Limited, 2011. ldoceonline.com. Web. 10 November 2014.

[5]百度百科,“直接引语”,http://baike.baidu.com/view/1929194.htm(2014-11-17查询)

[6]《Collins英汉双解大词典》

[7]CNN:Qatar bails out
of
 Yemen
pact, citing procrastination’

http://edition.cnn.com/2011/WORLD/meast/05/12/yemen.unrest.qatar/index.html (accessed

November 12, 2014)

[8]CNN:France ‘stops blocking
Libya
 deal

http://edition.cnn.com/2003/WORLD/africa/09/11/libya.france/index.html (accessed

November 12, 2014)

[9]《Collins英汉双解大词典》

[10] Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English.Pearson Education
Limited, 2011. ldoceonline.com. Web. 10 November 2014.

[11]Cambridge dictionaries online.Cambridge University Press, 2014.

dictionary.cambridge.org.Web.
12 November 2014.

[12]《Collins英汉双解大词典》

[13]http://www.skynews.com.au/business/business/national/2014/07/29/s-p-still-happy-to-rate-australia-aaa.html

[14]《Collins英汉双解大词典》

[15]WIKIpedia. “Stock
market”,http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stock\_market (accessed

November 12, 2014)

[16] English Language Learners Stack Exchange,”On the market or In
the
market?
”,http://ell.stackexchange.com/questions/17733/on-the-market-or-in-the-market(accessed
November 12, 2014)

[17]《Collins英汉双解大词典》

[18]《Collins英汉双解大词典》

[19]《新英汉城大学辞典》

[20]BBC:Debate on the
careers
 services

.http://news.bbc.co.uk/democracylive/hi/wales/newsid\_9216000/9216254.stm (accessed
November 12, 2014)

[21] THE EXPRESS
TRIBUNE.http://tribune.com.pk/story/776722/cotton-production-target-may-be-missed/ (accessed
November 12, 2014)

[22] Thomson
Reuters.http://fr.reuters.com/article/idUKBNG48332720090804 (accessed
November 12, 2014)

[23]《21世纪大英汉词典》

[24] Alexander’s Gas & Oil Connections.

http://www.gasandoil.com/news/2003/10/cns34020 (accessed
November 12, 2014)

[25] business-standard.com http://www.business-standard.com/article/companies/ril-bp-to-supply-gas-to-andhra-power-projects-112082100046\_1.html (accessed
November 12, 2014)

[26]《Collins英汉双解大词典》

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